Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

根據(jù)圖片內(nèi)容寫一篇不少于60詞的短文。

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Answer 1

【答案】Hi, I am Jim. I am a boy. I am a student in Hong Xing Middle School. On school days, I usually get up at six o’clock in the morning. Then I take a shower. At seven, I have a glass of milk and some bread for my breakfast. I go to school at about ten past seven. Classes begin at eight o’clock. I have four classes in the morning. In the afternoon, I have two classes. At half past four in the afternoon, it’s time for me to play football with my classmates. We are all tired but happy. Then I go home and do my homework at six in the evening. I usually go to bed at nine. This is my school day. What about you, please tell me.

【解析】

本文屬于圖畫作文，描述吉姆一天的生活。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。

亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如usually, get up, in the morning, take a shower, a glass of, at+時(shí)間點(diǎn), it’s time for sb to do以及what about。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。