Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

假如你有一位同學(xué)叫Jack,他在生活和學(xué)習(xí)方面與過去有很大的不同。請根據(jù)表格提示用英語寫一篇短文,介紹一下他的進(jìn)步。

過去	現(xiàn)在
起床晚,經(jīng)常上課遲到	早早起床讀英語,按時(shí)到校
上課說話,不聽課	認(rèn)真聽講,記筆記
晚上不學(xué)習(xí),玩游戲	晚上在家認(rèn)真學(xué)習(xí),有問題向父母尋求幫助
……	……

注意:1.詞數(shù)80~100;

2.請不要逐句翻譯,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;

3.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名。

Answer 1

【答案】I have a classmate.His name is Jack.He used to be a problem student.But now he is one of the best students in our class.In the past years,he used to get up late and was always late for school.But now he gets up early and reads English every morning.He gets to school on time every day.In class,he used to talk with others in class.He didn’t use to listen to the teachers.But now he is very careful in class and takes a lot of notes.In the evening,he used to play computer games or watch TV at home.But now he studies and does his homework carefully.When he has problems,he asks his parents for help.What’s more,he used to fight with other students,but now he usually helps students who are in trouble and gets on well with his classmates.

【解析】

寫作思路：本文可以分為三個(gè)部分，首先開頭點(diǎn)明主題，說明變化的發(fā)生；接下來陳述變化的具體細(xì)節(jié)，在此環(huán)節(jié)可以今夕對比進(jìn)行，注意句子的時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用要正確；最后針對變化進(jìn)行總結(jié)。本篇文章首先I have a classmate. His name is Jack. He used to be a problem student. But now he is one of the best students in our class.點(diǎn)明本篇文章的主題，說明Jack現(xiàn)在有了很大的變化；然后利用He used to…but now…句型陳述具體的變化，按照文章要求逐一說明，層次分明，思路清晰，其中還用到What’s more 使得文章具有連貫性。