Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

這是Ann家上周野餐時的照片，看圖并發(fā)揮你的想象力，寫一篇文章，60詞左右。

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Answer 1

【答案】This is a photo of Ann’s family. Look！ They were having a picnic in the park. Ann and her sister were watching the rabbit. The rabbit looks so funny. It was running in and out of the holes in the grass. Ann’s mother was watching some flowers. Maybe she was thinking of planting some flowers at home. Ann’s father and brother were running. How happy they were!

【解析】這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如a photo of Ann’s family，have a picnic，in the park，look so funny，running in and out of the holes，in the grass，think of等。而They were having a picnic in the park. / The rabbit looks so funny./ Maybe she was thinking of planting some flowers at home.等多種句式的運(yùn)用更是為文章增色不少，是本篇習(xí)作的亮點。