Question

【題目】近年，有一些地區(qū)提出把游泳納入中考的體育考試，并在學(xué)生中做了一次問卷調(diào)查。下面是一個(gè)學(xué)校的調(diào)查結(jié)果，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)調(diào)查情況寫一篇英語短文闡明調(diào)查結(jié)果及表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)。

	贊成的學(xué)生人數(shù)占：57%	不贊成的學(xué)生人數(shù)占：43%
	理由： 1. 強(qiáng)身健體，預(yù)防疾病 2. 訓(xùn)練求生技能 3. 休閑娛樂，放松身心	理由： 1. 害怕水 2. 有危險(xiǎn)性 3. 氣溫低時(shí)容易感冒
	你的觀點(diǎn)與理由？

要求：

1. 詞數(shù)80左右。（文章的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)）

2. 不得透露學(xué)校，姓名等個(gè)人信息，否則不予評(píng)分。

In recently years, some districts are planning to include swimming in the examination of physical education. And they made a survey about it in some schools, Here’s the result from one school.

Answer 1

【答案】例文In recently years, some districts are planning to include swimming in the examination of physical education. And they made a survey about it in some schools. Here’s the result from one school.

About 57 per cent students like to have swimming lessons at school. Because it can help build up our body and guide against (prevent) illness. Besides, swimming is a survival skill when we face some natural disasters. It is also a good choice to go swimming lo relax ourselves when we are free.

However, 43 percent students are against this plan for some reasons. First, some of them are afraid of getting in the water. Second, it may be dangerous because we may drown. Then, when it is cold, we may catch a cold.

In my opinion, it’s a good idea lo have swimming lessons. I can improve my health, and relax myself after classes as well.

(In my opinion, it’s not a good way to have swimming lessons at school. Because it’s expensive to build a swimming pool, and sometimes it’s difficult to keep the water clean because there are many students at school.)

【解析】

本文是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)所給材料，闡明關(guān)于“把游泳納入中考體育考試”的兩種不同觀點(diǎn)，而且最后還要表達(dá)出自己的觀點(diǎn)，所以文章主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。文章分為三個(gè)部分，第一部分，首先引出本文話題，并用Here’s the result from one school.起到承上啟下的作用， 引出調(diào)查結(jié)果；第二部分分別闡述兩種不同觀點(diǎn)About 57 per cent students like to have swimming lessons at school. Because….; However, 43 percent students are against this plan for some reasons.最后提出自己的觀點(diǎn)并進(jìn)行總結(jié)In my opinion…。注意闡明觀點(diǎn)列舉理由時(shí)，要注意條理性，比如用到表示次序先后的詞first, second, then；或者句型It can…… It also can…..,besides…..等；本文內(nèi)容完整，寫作條理清晰，語言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，是一篇不錯(cuò)的文章。