Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)（共計(jì)20分）

假如你叫瑪麗，你校正在開(kāi)展一項(xiàng)專題討論：九年級(jí)學(xué)生要不要加強(qiáng)體育鍛煉？根據(jù)以下信息給報(bào)社寫(xiě)封信，介紹討論情況并說(shuō)出自己的觀點(diǎn)。

65%的學(xué)生認(rèn)為	35%的學(xué)生認(rèn)為
1. 應(yīng)該每天進(jìn)行體育鍛煉。	1. 鍛煉浪費(fèi)時(shí)間，使人疲勞。
2. 可以做早操，打乒乓球，但時(shí)間不要太長(zhǎng)。	2. 運(yùn)動(dòng)后很興奮，不能很快投入學(xué)習(xí)。
3. 鍛煉有助于健康，減少疾病。	3. 運(yùn)動(dòng)中可能會(huì)受傷。
4. 運(yùn)動(dòng)是大腦休息，學(xué)習(xí)效果更好。	……

要求： 1. 開(kāi)頭已給出（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；

2. 參考詞匯：effective (有效的），reduce 減少，brain大腦。

Dear Editor,

I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about whether students should take physical exercise. _

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Yours,

Mary

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear editor,

I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about whether students should take physical exercise. 65% of the students think they should take exercise every day, such as doing morning exercises, playing ping-pong and basketball, but it shouldn’t take up too much time. Proper exercise can keep healthy and reduce diseases. What’s more, sports let their brains have a rest so that they can study effectively.

On the other hand, 35% believe taking exercise is a waste of time and it is tiring. After having sports, they are much too excited for a long time to pay attention to their lessons. It’s also possible to get hurt in sports.

Yours,

Mary

【解析】

【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的作文。首先這篇作文的結(jié)構(gòu)完整，層次分明。這篇作文共有兩段。第一段是承接題目中所給出的開(kāi)頭，點(diǎn)明主題之后，敘述了支持學(xué)生應(yīng)該參加體育鍛煉的學(xué)生們的觀點(diǎn)。要點(diǎn)完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確。第二段是另外一部分同學(xué)的觀點(diǎn)，他們覺(jué)得學(xué)生們不應(yīng)該參加體育鍛煉。其次這篇作文較好的注意了語(yǔ)句之間的鏈接，力求使文章表達(dá)流暢。文章句型的使用如65% of the students think... such as...，What’s more, sports let their brains have a rest so that they can study effectively.，After having sports,，It’s also possible get hurt in sports等。