Question

【題目】假如你是李華，請你根據(jù)以下提示用英語寫一封保護(hù)大象的倡議書。

提示：陸地上最大的哺乳動物，可以活到80歲。目前數(shù)量在減少，因為：

1）人們砍伐森林，大象漸漸失去家園；

2）人們捕殺大象，獲取象牙。

3）應(yīng)如何保護(hù)它們(不少于三條)。

要求：1）恰當(dāng)運用比較級和最高級；2）80詞左右。倡議書的結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：哺乳動物mammal; 象牙ivory

Dear classmates

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I believe everyone's contribution (貢獻(xiàn)) can make a big difference.

Yours,

Lihua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear classmates,

Elephants are the largest mammals on the land and they can live up to be eighty years. But now the number of the elephants is decreasing because of the following reasons. Firstly, people cut down trees in the forest, so elephants are losing their homes. Secondly, people also kill elephants for their ivory.

As a result, we need to do something to help them. First, we should plant more trees to build the homes for elephants. Second, we can put up post on the street to tell people that it is against the law to kill elephants. Or we can also hold some activities in some public places to spread the idea of protecting the elephants.

I believe everyone's contribution (貢獻(xiàn)) can make a big difference.

Yours,

Lihua

【解析】

本文是一封倡議書,倡議大家保護(hù)大象。文章共分為三個方面的內(nèi)容，首先描述大象想在所處的現(xiàn)狀，然后說明出現(xiàn)這種狀況的原因，最后為了保護(hù)的大象我們應(yīng)該如何去做。時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時。提出倡議時可以使用We can/ We should/ Let’s/We’d better的表示建議的句子。寫作時注意不要使用太復(fù)雜的句型，以免出現(xiàn)語法錯誤，為使句子具有連貫性，可以適當(dāng)使用連詞。本篇文章內(nèi)容完整，符合材料要求，Elephants are the largest mammals …,及First, we should plant more trees 也使用到了比較級和最高級；Firstly,…. Secondly,…等詞的使用使文章具有層次性，條理清晰。并且一些連詞的使用，比如so, or, but等也使文章具有連貫性，是一篇不錯的文章。