Question

【題目】請(qǐng)以“My Good Friend”為題寫一篇短文，詞數(shù)60字左右。

提示：1. 我有一個(gè)好朋友，名叫Bob。

2. 他12歲，個(gè)子高。

3. 他喜歡健康的食物，不喜歡漢堡包。

4. 他喜歡運(yùn)動(dòng)。他有五個(gè)棒球，八個(gè)排球，四個(gè)足球，三個(gè)籃球。

5. 他每天都做運(yùn)動(dòng)。

Answer 1

【答案】

My Good Friend

I have a good friend and his name is Bob. He is twelve years old and he is a tall boy because he likes healthy food instead of hamburger. What’s more, he enjoys doing sports in his free time. He has five baseballs, eight volleyballs, four footballs as well as three basketballs. He loves sports so much that he does exercise every day.

【解析】

試題分析：要求學(xué)生使用簡(jiǎn)潔的英語，介紹自己好朋友的姓名，外貌以及飲食與體育愛好。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文作者按照題目要求，正確完整的寫作此文。語言簡(jiǎn)練，文筆流暢，善于使用并列連詞與轉(zhuǎn)副詞將簡(jiǎn)單句連接成長句，另外，還能別出心裁的使用短語和主從句。例如，漂亮短語有：healthy food； instead of；What’s more, enjoys doing sports ； in his free time；as well as；does exercise。經(jīng)典的主從句：he is a tall boy because he likes healthy food instead of hamburger（ 原因狀語從句）。He loves sports so much that he does exercise every day.（結(jié)果狀語從句）�？傊�，這是一篇優(yōu)美的習(xí)作。