Question

假設(shè)你是來(lái)自海口的李明，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下表格，以Changes in My Hometown 為題寫一篇70詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。

	In the past	Nowadays
house	low	big and tall…
school	old	modern…
road	narrow	wide…

 要求：1.短文須包括表格所提示的全部?jī)?nèi)容。
2.書寫規(guī)范，正確使用標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫。語(yǔ)句通順流暢。
3 短文不少于60詞。短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Changes in My Hometown
My mane is Li Ming. I come from Haikou. Some changes have taken place in my hometown.
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                          

Answer 1

Changes in My Hometown
My mane is Li Ming. I come from Haikou. Some changes have taken place in my hometown.In the past,people lived in old dark house.But nowadays,they can live in tall and bright buildings.Students feel very happy because they can study in modern schools.Teachers use computers.What’s more,roads are becoming wider.There are ring roads in haikou too.In the past,roads were narrow.I love my hometown.

試題分析：這是一篇材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)但很簡(jiǎn)單，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要仔細(xì)考慮，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，也可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知，本文以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主，主語(yǔ)是第一人稱和第三人稱。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇文章主要是家鄉(xiāng)的變化。文中使用了一般過(guò)去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)進(jìn)行比對(duì)，讓讀者體會(huì)到作者家鄉(xiāng)所呈現(xiàn)的巨大變化。文中使用的there be句型，because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句，還有恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接插入語(yǔ)What’s more等為文章增色不少。