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2．"綠色生活"（green life） 是一種沒有污染、節(jié)約資源和能源、對環(huán)境友好、健康的生活．綠色生活對我們大家都有好處，請你How to be a greener person為題，寫一篇90詞左右的短文談談如何踐行綠色生活．
How to be a greener person
                                       

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
It's important for us to live a green life to help with the environment．對于我們來說綠色生活去保護環(huán)境是重要的
it is+adj+for sb+to do sth對某人來說做某事是怎么樣的，it是形式主語，動詞不定式做真正主語．
【高分句型二】
We should walk or ride a bike to school instead of taking a car我們應該走路或者騎自行車去學校而不是乘車．
instead of …而不是，代替．

解答 With the rapid development of the society，great changes have taken place in people's daily life．As a result，the environment is polluted seriously．（現狀）It's important for us to live a green life to help with the environment．【高分句型一】We should walk or ride a bike to school instead of taking a car．【高分句型二】Besides，we had better try to use things that can be recycled and say no to the things that can be used only once．Don't forget to turn off the lights when we leave the rooms．（建議）Even a small thing can make a big difference．We should do it now．

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