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4．在初中三年的學(xué)習(xí)生活中，父母、老師給了我們很多幫助．假設(shè)你是李明，在即將畢業(yè)之際，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一段文字以表達(dá)感激之情．感謝的對(duì)象在父母、老師中任選其一．內(nèi)容必須包括以下提示點(diǎn)：1、感謝的對(duì)象及原因；2、舉例說(shuō)明幫助你的事由、經(jīng)過(guò)和結(jié)果；3、你的感受和打算．
注意：1、文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名及地名；2、詞數(shù)在80-100之間，已給出的文字不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
DearMum，
Words can't show my thanks to you，You've taken good care of me in the past three years．When I was in trouble，you used to encourage me and cheer me up．Once I argued with my classmates and I didn't know how to deal with it．You talked with me the whole evening and gave me a lot of advice on how to get along with others．With your help，I've become a popular boy and made a lot of friends．I'm so thankful to you for your love and care that I'll work harder and try to do better in the future．
Best wishes
Yours
Li Ming．

Answer 1

分析 本題是一篇提綱作文，寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容是在初中三年的學(xué)習(xí)生活中，父母、老師給了我們很多幫助．假設(shè)你是李明，在即將畢業(yè)之際，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一段文字以表達(dá)感激之情．要求是感謝的對(duì)象在父母、老師中任選其一，根據(jù)這個(gè)內(nèi)容可知這里敘述的過(guò)去的事情，所以句子應(yīng)該用過(guò)去時(shí)．后面的感受及打算部分句子應(yīng)該用將來(lái)時(shí)．要注意句子上文之間的銜接．

解答 Dear Mum/Dad/Mum and Dad，
   Words can't show my thanks to you．You've taken good care of me in the past three years．When I was in trouble，you used to encourage me and cheer me up．Once I argued with my classmates and I didn't know how to deal with it．You talked with me the whole evening and gave me a lot of advice on how to get along with others．With your help，I've become a popular boy and made a lot of friends．I'm so thankful to you for your love and care that I'll work harder and try to do better in the future．
Best wishes
Yours
Li Ming

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本題是一篇提綱提作文，寫(xiě)給自己的父母或老師的感謝信，學(xué)生比較有話(huà)說(shuō)，但是要注意提示要點(diǎn)一定寫(xiě)全．同時(shí)還要注意遣詞造句的靈活性和語(yǔ)法規(guī)則的正確性．寫(xiě)作時(shí)，要注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式的變化．另外，還需要使用一些句型和短語(yǔ)，使整篇短文意思連貫，表達(dá)流暢．