Question

初中的生活即將結(jié)束，在裝載你收獲的行囊------成長記錄袋中還應(yīng)該增添一份自己滿意的答卷。請參考所提供的信息，以“My Middle School Life”為題寫一篇60—80詞左右的自我評價(jià)。
要求：1、自我評價(jià)中必須包括三方面的內(nèi)容。（過去：在老師的幫助下取得好成績，與同學(xué)相處融洽；現(xiàn)在：有許多愛好，這些愛好使你獲得許多知識；夢想：成為一名教師或者志愿者，幫助別人。）可以對每方面信息所包含的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行適當(dāng)?shù)卦鎏怼?br />2、再用兩三句話寫個(gè)簡單的未來寄語。
3、詞數(shù)：67—70詞左右。
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Answer 1

My Middle School Life
How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think of about myself.
In the past, I was proud of myself because I got on well with my classmates and my grades were good.
Now, I have many interests, such as reading books, playing sports and so on. In this way, I’ve got more knowledge and improved my life.
As for the future, I’ve two dreams. One is to be a teacher, and the other is to be a volunteer. Helping others is my greatest happiness.
Although I have made much progress, I’ll try my best to be better. Believing myself is the key to success.

試題分析: 這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作，介紹自己的學(xué)校生活。給出的材料比較全面，我們所要做的首先是應(yīng)用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)，注意從三方面進(jìn)行介紹。根據(jù)材料可知本文涉及過去現(xiàn)在將來三種時(shí)態(tài)，注意時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)間狀語的搭配問題，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，適當(dāng)使用連接詞，做到語意連貫。
點(diǎn)評：注意寫作中的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱和數(shù)的問題，時(shí)態(tài)一般是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱是第一人稱較多。寫作中語言要準(zhǔn)確、簡明，說明有條理，符合邏輯。