Question

20．同學(xué)們，我們身邊有很多助人為樂的同學(xué)，他們的事例值得我們學(xué)習(xí)．請根據(jù)下面表格信息給學(xué)校英文報寫一篇短文，談?wù)勆磉叺暮萌撕檬�，號召大家向他們學(xué)習(xí)．

Who they are	What they usually do to help others
Liu Na	make our school beautiful （clean …）
Zhang Hua	help other students with their students…
Wu Tong	Help the people in trouble （cheer others up …）
…	…

要求：（1）參考表格信 息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
      （2）語句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整．
      （3）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實地名和姓名；
      （4）詞數(shù)：60-80詞．（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)）
Dear Editor，
In our school，some students are always thinking more of others and are ready to help them．I'm moved deeply．Here is what they usually do．
Liu Na is a very good student．
She often picks up rubbish and cleans the classroom to make our school more beautiful．Zhang Hua studies well．So she often helps other students with their studies．We all like her．Wu Tong is outgoing．He likes cheering others up．If we are sad，he always talks with us and tries to make us happy．He is also helpful．He likes helping people who are in trouble．He is very popular in our school．
I hope everyone can learn from them and do something for others．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容為根據(jù)表格信息給學(xué)校英文報寫一篇短文，談?wù)勆磉叺暮萌撕檬�，號召大家向他們學(xué)習(xí)．時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱為第三人稱單數(shù)和第一人稱．時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時．寫作要點包括：1．介紹Liu Na 的好人好事；2．介紹Zhang Hua的好人好事；3．介紹Wu Tong 的好人好事．常用的重點句型和短語：pick up，help…with…，cheer…up，try to do sth．等．

解答 Dear Editor，
In our school，some students are always thinking more of others and are ready to help them．I'm moved deeply．Here is what they usually do．
Liu Na is a very good student．She often picks up rubbish and cleans the classroom to make our school more beautiful．Zhang Hua studies well．So she often helps other students with their studies．We all like her．Wu Tong is outgoing．He likes cheering others up．If we are sad，he always talks with us and tries to make us happy．He is also helpful．He likes helping people who are in trouble．He is very popular in our school．
I hope everyone can learn from them and do something for others．

點評 本圖表作文是結(jié)合表格內(nèi)容進(jìn)行寫作．圖表類作文表格內(nèi)容要全部包括在作文中，詞數(shù)要符合要求．句式表達(dá)要正確，注意句子的主謂賓、主系表等結(jié)構(gòu)．文章結(jié)構(gòu)要清晰．寫作前要仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的信息，明確要點；在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；語言表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣．