Question

【題目】【山東省青島市2015年中考英語(yǔ)試題】書面表達(dá)（共15分）

現(xiàn)在，很多中學(xué)生被近視困擾，請(qǐng)就此現(xiàn)象寫一篇短文談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?/span>

內(nèi)容包括：1. 造成近視的原因；

2. 近視對(duì)學(xué)習(xí)或生活的影響；

3. 你認(rèn)為應(yīng)該如何保護(hù)視力？（至少兩條建議）

要求：1. 字?jǐn)?shù)80-100字。開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)。

2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名與人名。

參考詞匯： eyesight n. 視力 nearsighted adj. 近視的

have good eyesight 視力好 have bad eyesight 視力差

Quite a lot of students have become nearsighted now

Answer 1

【答案】

Quite a lot of students have become nearsighted now. I think the main reason is that students don’t have a good habit while studying. Bad eyesight brings trouble to our life and study. For example, if we leave our glasses at home, we can’t take notes in class. We will feed uncomfortable when we swim with glasses. Here is my advice: on the one hand, teenagers shouldn’t study for hours without breaks because our eyes need to relax. On the other hand, having sports and doing eye exercise are also helpful.

It’s very important to have good eyesight. So let’s take good care of our eyes.

【解析】

試題分析：本題是一篇給提綱作文，要仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確寫作要點(diǎn)：近視的原因、對(duì)生活學(xué)習(xí)的影響、如何保護(hù)視力。短文要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思，要包括提綱的全部?jī)?nèi)容。根據(jù)本題要求，可知本題主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，用第一稱形式。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文按照提綱提示進(jìn)行寫作，內(nèi)容完整，包含了提綱所提示的全部信息。本范文恰當(dāng)?shù)剡\(yùn)用了復(fù)合句進(jìn)行表達(dá)：比如：I think the main reason is that students don’t have a good habit while studying.（用了賓語(yǔ)從句、表語(yǔ)從句）；if we leave our glasses at home, we can’t take notes in class.（用了條件狀語(yǔ)從句）；teenagers shouldn’t study for hours without breaks because our eyes need to relax.（用了原因狀語(yǔ)從句）等等。文中的一些結(jié)構(gòu)也運(yùn)用得當(dāng)，使短文更加生動(dòng)具體：比如：on the one hand, on the other hand; It’s very important to have good eyesight. So let’s take good care of our eyes.等等。