Question

假設(shè)你將代表你校2013屆畢業(yè)生在學(xué)校畢業(yè)典禮上發(fā)言，請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿，發(fā)言稿的內(nèi)要點(diǎn)如下表所示。

回顧	在美麗的學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)了三年; 將會(huì)永遠(yuǎn)記住它 老師們總是盡力把課上得生動(dòng)有趣 課余生活豐富多彩; 參加這些活動(dòng)很有樂(lè)趣 學(xué)到了很多知識(shí); 也取得了很大的進(jìn)步
感謝	老師和父母的支持和幫助
祝愿	……

注意：
發(fā)言稿須包括所有的要點(diǎn)，要求語(yǔ)句通順、意思連貫；
表格中”祝愿”一欄，請(qǐng)用自己的2至3句話(huà)展開(kāi)合理想象，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右，發(fā)言稿的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, my dear teachers and fellow graduates.
It is a great honour for me to make a speech on behalf of (代表) the graduating class of 2013. _________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
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Goodbye, our beautiful school, our dear teachers and our friends.
Thank you for listening.

Answer 1

We have studied in this beautiful school for three years. We will remember it for ever. Our teachers always try their best to make their lessons lively and interesting. After-school activities are rich and colourful. We have fun taking part in them. We have learned a lot. We have also made great progress. We want to thank our teachers and parents for their support and help. / We are grateful to our teachers and parents for their support and help. I wish our school more beautiful and all of us a wonderful future.  

試題分析：本書(shū)面表達(dá)是一篇發(fā)言稿，首先是回顧過(guò)去，所以本部分應(yīng)該用過(guò)去時(shí)；然后是感謝應(yīng)該用現(xiàn)在時(shí)，最后是祝愿，可以用將來(lái)時(shí)。由于本發(fā)言稿是代表同學(xué)們做的，故人稱(chēng)應(yīng)該用we，不要用I。應(yīng)注意連詞和固定短語(yǔ)的用法，注意書(shū)寫(xiě)時(shí)應(yīng)該包括所以?xún)?nèi)容。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本題的難點(diǎn)在于確定文章的時(shí)態(tài)及人稱(chēng)，很多同學(xué)會(huì)用第一人稱(chēng)進(jìn)行書(shū)寫(xiě)。其次，對(duì)于提綱作文，書(shū)寫(xiě)時(shí)一定要有層次性。