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9．初中三年的學(xué)習(xí)生活即將結(jié)束，我們將迎接暑假，怎樣擁有愉快且有意義的假期，請(qǐng)分享我的假期精彩．（根據(jù)以下提示要點(diǎn)，描述你的充實(shí)假期計(jì)劃，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，字?jǐn)?shù)不少于90詞）．
1．和父母一起前往發(fā)達(dá)國家旅行，開闊眼界widen our sight，豐富知識(shí)richen our knowledge．
2．捐書donate books籍給貧困地區(qū)的孩子們．
3．每天瀏覽因特網(wǎng)，關(guān)注世界．
4．為環(huán)保做些事，梅花我們的城市．
5．做些家務(wù)，提高自理能力．
6．看望祖父母，和他們住幾天．
7．鍛煉身體，保持健康，為新的學(xué)習(xí)生活做充分準(zhǔn)備．
You'll end three years of junior high school learning life，how will you spend your summer vacation？I'll share my happy and meaningful summer vacation plan with you．
First，I plan to travel to some developed countries with my parents so that we can widen our sight and richen our knowledge．Second，I will serf the Internet every day，paying attention to what happens around the world．Third，I won't forget to do something meaningful for the society and the environment．For example，I will donate many books to the children in poor areas．And I will take part in the environmental protection to make our city more beautiful．Fourth，I will do some housework to improve my ability of looking after myself．I also plan to visit my grandparents and live with them for several days．Last but not least，I'm going to do more exercise and keep healthy to get ready for the new study life．
How I look forward to the coming of the meaningful summer vacation!

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
①First，I plan to travel to some developed countries with my parents so that we can widen our sight and richen our knowledge．首先和父母一起前往發(fā)達(dá)國家旅行，以便能開闊眼界，豐富知識(shí)，句子中plan to do sth計(jì)劃做某事，so that以便，引導(dǎo)一個(gè)目的狀語從句．
②Third，I won't forget to do something meaningful for the society and the environment．第三，我不會(huì)忘記為社會(huì)和環(huán)境做些有意義的事情．句子中forget to do sth忘記做某事，后面跟to引導(dǎo)的不定式短語．

解答 We'll end three years of junior high school life．How will we spend our summer vacation？I'll share my happy and meaningful summer vacation plan with you．（引出話題）
First，I plan to travel to some developed countries with my parents so that we can widen our sight and richen our knowledge（高分句型）．（和父母旅行）Second，I will serf the Internet every day，paying attention to what happens around the world．（瀏覽因特網(wǎng)，關(guān)注世界）Third，I won't forget to do something meaningful for the society and the environment（高分句型）．For example，I will donate many books to the children in poor areas．And I will take part in the environmental protection to make our city more beautiful．（作公益事業(yè)）Fourth，I will do some housework to improve my ability of looking after  myself．I also plan to visit my grandparents and live with them for several days．（做家務(wù)及看望祖父母）Last but not least，I'm going to do more exercise and keep healthy to get ready for the new study life．（參加一些活動(dòng)）
How I look forward to the coming of the meaningful summer vacation!（熱切盼望）

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