Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)

假如你是Simon，請(qǐng)介紹一下你的朋友Sandy.

要點(diǎn)：1. 14歲，既高又苗條， 藍(lán)眼睛，短頭發(fā)。2. 她來(lái)自美國(guó)，但現(xiàn)在和父母住在蘇州。3. 喜歡學(xué)習(xí)，比較擅長(zhǎng)數(shù)學(xué)和跳舞，老師和同學(xué)們都很喜愛(ài)她。4. 熱愛(ài)運(yùn)動(dòng)，放學(xué)后經(jīng)常和同學(xué)們一起打籃球。她談?wù)摶@球并且在電視上觀看籃球比賽。5. 非常喜歡中國(guó)，認(rèn)為中國(guó)朋友很友好。

要求：1.語(yǔ)句通順連貫，符合題目中的要點(diǎn)。 2. 60詞左右。

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version1：

My friend Sandy is 14 years old. She is tall and slim. She has blue eyes and short hair. She is from the USA, but now she lives with his parents in Suzhou. She loves studying. She is good at Maths and dancing . Her classmates and teachers all like her. She also likes sport. She often plays basketball with her classmates after school. She talks about basketball with friends and watches basketball matches on TV. She loves China very much. She thinks Chinese friends are kind.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：這篇文章語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，敘述清楚，詞匯及時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，能夠把提示的內(nèi)容敘述清楚，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫是一篇不錯(cuò)的文章。