Question

某學(xué)校將每年的3月5日定為愛(ài)心志愿者活動(dòng)日，今年活動(dòng)的主題是“人人為貧困孩子獻(xiàn)愛(ài)心”。請(qǐng)你以學(xué)生會(huì)的名義寫(xiě)一份倡議書(shū)，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：
許多孩子因貧困而上不起學(xué)；（too…to…）；
在冬天，很多孩子沒(méi)有暖的衣服穿。他們沒(méi)有足夠的書(shū)籍，沒(méi)有書(shū)包；
有些學(xué)校離家很遠(yuǎn)，每天很早就起床，要花費(fèi)一個(gè)半小時(shí)的時(shí)間到達(dá)學(xué)校。（far away, it takes …to do ）；
我們能為他們做的是……（至少2點(diǎn)）。
文章開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。要求60詞左右。
Dear students,
In some parts of our country, there are many children out of school.         ______
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Thanks for your joining!
Students’ Union

Answer 1

Dear students,
In some parts of our country, there are many children out of school. They are too poor to go to school. At the same time, they don't have enough school things and clothes. In my opinion, each child should have the right to go to school, but there are few chances for the poor children. So we should help them as possible as we can, just like giving them school things, clothes and so on. We hope they will have the same chance of getting knowledge as we do in the school.
Thanks for your joining!
Students’ Union

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語(yǔ)是第一人稱(chēng)，注意時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文進(jìn)行了較為全面的說(shuō)明，能用簡(jiǎn)短的詞匯表達(dá)出提綱的內(nèi)容，并且進(jìn)行了適當(dāng)?shù)奶幚�，�?zhǔn)確的添加自己的觀點(diǎn)，同時(shí)使用了一些固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。