Question

【題目】書面表達

請根據(jù)提示，發(fā)揮想象，以“My Dream Home”為題寫一篇80詞左右的英語短文。

內容包括以下要點：

1. 一個靠近湖邊的新房子，有三層。有時在湖上劃船。房子周圍有許多花和樹。

2. 遠離市中心，空氣新鮮。房子前面有個大花園，早晨可以聽到鳥語，聞到花香。

3. 在頂樓有一個家庭影院。周末時想邀請朋友們來看電影。

4. 你的感想…….(適當發(fā)揮)

要求：1．語句通順、語言規(guī)范。 2．書寫工整、標點符號正確。3. 開頭已給，不計詞數(shù)。

My Dream Home

Hello , everyone! Today I want to tell you about my dream home.

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Answer 1

【答案】

My dream home

Hello, everyone! Today I want to tell you about my dream home.

My dream home is a new house near a lake. It has three floors. Sometimes I row a boat on the lake.There are many flowers and trees around the house.

It is far away from the city center, so the air here is fresh. There is a big garden in front of my dream home. In the morning I can hear the birds sing and smell the flowers.

There’s a home cinema on the top floor. At weekends I would like to invite my friends to come and watch wonderful films.

It’s a wonderful place to live. It’s lucky enough for me to live in a house like this.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇作文叫小作者介紹自己夢想中的家，小作者首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。要求介紹。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。小作者還必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。

寫作亮點：這篇短文不僅使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實。如It is far away from the city center, so the air here is fresh. There is a big garden in front of my dream home.等使文章的表達更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。