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15．根據(jù)要求完成大作文
同學(xué)們，健康的生活習(xí)慣對于成長中的你們是非常重要的．請以How to Keep Healthy為題，從鍛煉、飲食、睡眠及其它方面談?wù)勀愕淖龇ê涂捶ǎ?br />要求：
1．語言表達準確，語意通順、連貫；
2．書寫工整、規(guī)范；
3．根據(jù)所給內(nèi)容，請做適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
4．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和真實地名；
5．詞數(shù)：70詞左右．
How to Keep Healthy．

Answer 1

分析 本文是話題作文．本題是圍繞健康展開敘述，重點是從鍛煉、飲食、睡眠及其它方面談?wù)勀愕淖龇ê涂捶ǎ�你首先�?yīng)該說明健康的重要性，然后，分別敘述如何才能保持健康---健康的生活習(xí)慣，健康的生活方式應(yīng)是怎樣的．最后，要發(fā)出倡議，號召大家保持健康．在寫作時，本文的人稱可以用第一人稱，因為文章涉及的內(nèi)容是一種常態(tài)，所以時態(tài)一般應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時．應(yīng)該盡量包括文中提示的內(nèi)容，可稍加拓展．另外文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和真實地名；詞數(shù)為70詞左右．

解答 參考范文：
How to Keep Healthy
  As we all know，it's very important to keep healthy．But do you know how to keep healthy？
  Firstly，I think we must have enough food to keep us healthy．Breakfast is necessary．It gives us energy for morning．We must also have the right kind of food．Remember to eat more fruit and vegetables，but less junk food．Don't forget to wash your hands before meals．
  Secondly，it's necessary for us to take exercise．Exercise will keep us active and strong．
  Thirdly，I think staying up is bad for our health．If we can't get enough sleep，we may have a headache．We should go to bed early and get up early．
  Lastly，listening to music or chatting can also make us feel relaxed．

點評 本題為話題作文．本書面表達的中心是如何才能保持健康，所以應(yīng)該圍繞題目的提示進行書寫．應(yīng)該注意表述的邏輯性和條理性，盡量用簡單的語言來表述．要書寫工整、規(guī)范，字數(shù)合乎要求．