Question

【題目】根據(jù)中文和英文提示，寫一封意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于50詞的回信。信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，其詞數(shù)不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。所給英文提示詞語(yǔ)僅供選用。請(qǐng)不要寫出你的校名和姓名。

假如你叫李華，你的美國(guó)筆友Jim要來(lái)北京參加交換生活動(dòng)。他寫郵件向你了解中國(guó)的禮儀，你們通常在家和學(xué)校怎么做，以及與人融洽相處最重要的是什么。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)他的問(wèn)題回復(fù)郵件。

提示詞語(yǔ)：shake hands，eat first，quite，respect，friendly

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Answer 1

【答案】Hi !Jim,

I’m glad to hear from you. Welcome to Beijing.In China, we are supposed to shake hands when we meet someone for the first time. And we are not supposed to eat first when older people are at the table.

For students, it is necessary to be polite to others. At home, we never start talking until our parents finish their words. At school, greeting teachers and schoolmates is considered polite behavior. We always stand up when we talk to our teachers. Besides, when we are in public places like museums or libraries, it’s important to keep quiet.

In a word, showing enough respect for others is the secret to getting along with people both in China and in other countries.

I hope you’ll enjoy yourself in Beijing.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

這是一篇書信作文。假如你叫李華，你的美國(guó)筆友Jim要來(lái)北京參加交換生活動(dòng)。他寫郵件向你了解中國(guó)的禮儀，要求根據(jù)中文和英文提示，給他寫一封回信。首先要注意郵件的格式，時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱主要為第一人稱和第三人稱。在動(dòng)筆寫作之前，要認(rèn)真審題，對(duì)來(lái)信中的問(wèn)題要一一都作出回答；根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)和內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫作，在寫作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)、自然流暢；同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤。
經(jīng)典句：In a word, showing enough respect for others is the secret to getting along with people both in China and in other countries.使用in a word來(lái)連接最后的總結(jié)。在總結(jié)句中用showing enough respects for others動(dòng)名詞短語(yǔ)作主語(yǔ)，后面使用了both and來(lái)連接連個(gè)介詞短語(yǔ)。