Question

7．網(wǎng)上購物已經(jīng)成為當(dāng)前一種非常流行的消費方式．人們在網(wǎng)上通常會買些什么東西呢？下面圖片表示你的調(diào)查結(jié)果．請以Shopping online為題寫一篇80詞以上的短文闡述你的調(diào)查結(jié)果．
Shopping online
Nowadays shopping online is becoming more and more popular．People canbuy whatever they want on the Internet．We can know from the picture that 30% of the people spend their money on clothes and shoes．The number is the biggest of all.8% of them like buying moive tickets onlinne．The number of people who buy food and books is almost the same．15%buy books and 16% buy food．And it's also a good way for people to buy electrical products online，because they can receive their products at home．18% of the people choose this way．There are also 13% of the people buyingother things online．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：①The number of people ②who buy food and books is almost the same．買食物和書的人數(shù)差不到相同．
①the number of指…的數(shù)量，謂語動詞用單數(shù)．
②who作為引導(dǎo)詞引導(dǎo)的定語從句，在定語從句中充當(dāng)主語，修飾先行詞people．
高分句型二：And①it's also a good way for people to buy electrical products online，②because they can receive their products at home．人們在網(wǎng)上購買電器產(chǎn)品這也是一個很好的方式，因為他們可以在家里收到他們的產(chǎn)品．
①固定句式It+be+名詞+for sb to do sth指對于某人做某事是…it為形式主語，不定式為真正的主語．
②because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句．

解答 Shopping online
Nowadays shopping online is becoming more and more popular．People can buy whatever they want on the Internet．【點明網(wǎng)上購物已經(jīng)成為當(dāng)前一種非常流行的消費方式】We can know from the picture that 30%  of the people spend their money on clothes and shoes．The number is the biggest of all.8% of them like buying moive tickets onlinne．The number of people who buy food and books is almost the same．【高分句型】15%buy books and 16% buy food．And it's also a good way for people to buy electrical products online，because they can receive their products at home．【高分句型】18% of the people choose this way．There are also 13% of the people buying other things online．（具體分析調(diào)查結(jié)果，人們在網(wǎng)上通常會買些什么東西）

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