Question

2．仔細觀察圖片，并按要求作文．

寫作要求：
1．結(jié)合自己的實際，描述畫面所反映的現(xiàn)狀．
2．簡述這一現(xiàn)狀帶來的后果．
3．針對這一現(xiàn)狀，表達自己的觀點或愿望．
4．詞數(shù)大約60-90詞（短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）．
5．文中不得出現(xiàn)與考生本人相關(guān)的真實校名和姓名等信息．
詞語提示：stress（壓力）    short-sighted（近視的）  improving classes（提高班）
eyesight（視力）  poor（弱的）     do sports（做運動）    relax（放松）
Nowadays，we students have heavy burden （負擔） of studies．At school，we begin our classes fromabout 7：30 in the morning and finish too many classes till 6：00 in the eveningevery day．Besides，after class we have to spend a great deal of time doing ourhomework and going over our lessons．What's worse，we still take all kinds ofimproving classes at the weekend，which makes us very tired both in physicalityand in mind．
As a result，wehave no time to do sports，take part in activities or even make friends．Because of much heavier schoolwork and less rest and sleep，our health isbecoming poorer and poorer．Meanwhile，most of us are short-sighted．
In my opinion，it'stime to say goodbye to our thick glasses．Five days devoted to school areenough for us．The world is colorful and there is a lot of fun in it．We needour own time to do what we like．If so，we will have a wonderful life．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖畫作文．內(nèi)容是描述畫面所反映的現(xiàn)狀，簡述這一現(xiàn)狀帶來的后果，表達自己的觀點或愿望．時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1．描述圖畫，描述現(xiàn)狀：學習壓力大，課程多
2．帶來的后果；
3．表達自己的觀點或愿望
常用到的重點短語：
spend+時間+doing sth 花時間做某事
what's worse 更糟糕的是
because of 由于
take part in 參加
比較級+and+比較級 越來越…

【高分句型】
1．①What's worse，we still take all kinds of improving classes at the weekend，②which③makes us very tired both in physicalityand in mind．
①what's worse 更糟糕的是
②which引導的非限制性定語從句．修飾前面的整個句子．
③make sb+adj 讓某人怎樣
2．①Because of much heavier schoolwork and less rest and sleep，our health is becoming②poorer and poorer．
①because of 由于 后接名詞、代詞或動名詞
②比較級+and+比較級 越來越…

3．We need our own time①to do ②what we like．
①動詞不定式做目的狀語．
②what引導的賓語從句，作為do的賓語．

解答 Nowadays，we students have heavy burden of studies．At school，we begin our classes from about 7：30 in the morning and finish too many classes till 6：00 in the evening every day．Besides，after class we have to spend a great deal of time doing our homework and going over our lessons．What's worse，we still take all kinds of improving classes at the weekend，which makes us very tired both in physicality and in mind．【高分句型】（描述圖畫，描述現(xiàn)狀）
As a result，we have no time to do sports，take part in activities or even make friends．Because of much heavier schoolwork and less rest and sleep，our health is becoming poorer and poorer．【高分句型】Meanwhile，most of us are short-sighted．（帶來的后果）
In my opinion，it's time to say goodbye to our thick glasses．Five days devoted to school are enough for us．The world is colorful and there is a lot of fun in it．We need our own time to do what we like．【高分句型】If so，we will have a wonderful life．（表達自己的觀點或愿望）

點評 1．看圖作文通常有一定得提示，所以在動筆前一定要通讀提示，弄懂寫作要求，如時間、地點、人物、事件發(fā)生地的先后順序等． 
2．圖畫是作文的依據(jù)，要仔細觀察分析圖畫的畫面，弄清畫面所反映的真實內(nèi)涵或蘊含的某種哲理． 
3．找出圖中事物之間的內(nèi)在聯(lián)系．如果多幅圖畫，就要分析畫與畫之間的內(nèi)在聯(lián)系及畫中人物、事物之間的邏輯聯(lián)系．要根據(jù)畫面情景展開聯(lián)想． 
4．反復閱讀所給的關(guān)鍵詞，并以此為線索從中悟出試題設(shè)計者要闡述的中心思想．