Question

假設你是9年級學生Daniel，你遇到了一些問題，你寫信給21世紀英文報的“知心大姐”欄目，希望得到幫助。問題如下：
1．作業(yè)太多，經常熬夜，感到疲勞；
2．不知如何平衡學與玩，感到焦慮；
3．有時與朋友爭吵，感覺不好；
4．父母只關心考試分數，很少交流．
注意：1．信的內容必須包含所列問題，并在信尾提出要求，希望得到幫助�？蛇m當發(fā)揮，使行文通順連貫；
2．詞數：90左右，開頭和結尾已經給出，不計入總詞數。
Dear agony aunt,
I’m a Grade 9 student. These days I have some problems, and I don’t know how to deal with them.
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Yours,
Daniel

Answer 1

Dear agony aunt,
I’m a Grade 9 student. These days I have some problems, and I don’t know how to deal with them.
First, I have a lot of homework to do every day, so I often have to stay up late to finish it. As a result, I feel tired in the daytime. Second, I don’t know how to achieve a balance between study and play. That’s why I feel stressed from time to time. What’s worse, I sometimes quarrel with my friends, and that makes me feel sad. Besides, my parents care only about the marks and we seldom communicate with each other.
Can you offer me some suggestions? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Daniel

試題分析: 這是一篇應用文寫作，寫一封信。給出的材料比較全面，我們所要做的首先是應用正確的英語句子把這些內容表達出來，在此基礎上亦可適當發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。寫作前先結合要表達的事情確定句子的人稱時態(tài)，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關系，語意連貫。
點評：注意寫作中的時態(tài)、人稱和數的問題，時態(tài)一般是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱是第一人稱較多。寫作中語言要準確、簡明，說明有條理，符合邏輯。