Question

【題目】 請將短文寫在答題卡相應的位置上。

我們的初中生活即將畫上句號。三載青春,既見證了同窗好友的共同奮斗,也書寫了美麗校園的多彩生活。當我們站在終點線駐足回首,總有一個鏡頭值得定格,總有一段故事值得回憶。

三年中你與同學之間發(fā)生了什么樣的故事?請你用英語寫一篇短文,分享一次令你印象深刻的經(jīng)歷,并談談你是如何理解同學間友誼的。

要求:

1. 詞數(shù)不少于80詞;

2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名。

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Answer 1

【答案】Looking back on the old days of my junior high school, I can see plenty of wonderful moments shared with my teachers and classmates. Among those, an experience of group study is the most unforgettable.

One day when I was in the eighth grade, my English teacher asked the class to make an English presentation about robots. In order to make a successful one, all the members of my group started discussion immediately after school. We divided the tasks into four parts and each of us was responsible for one part. Even though we had different jobs to do, we helped each other a lot by offering valuable information and possible methods. The day before the presentation, all the group members gathered at my home and prepared for it together. We all had a strong sense of satisfaction and achievement when working in a group and cooperating with each other. Without doubt, our presentation the next day was the best of all. Our friendship has depended since that day.

In my opinion, friendship not only means to care or understand, but also to support and encourage each other. Such a kind of friendship will always linger in my mind.

【解析】

1、題干解讀

本題目屬于記敘文寫作，根據(jù)題干要求，寫一次令你印象深刻的經(jīng)歷，并談談你是如何理解同學間友誼的。第一段寫對三年來的時光進行總結(jié)；第二段具體介紹令自己印象深刻的經(jīng)歷；第三段談談自己是如何理解同學間友誼的。

2、例文點評

例文采用三段式結(jié)構(gòu)；時態(tài)采用一般過去時為主，用一般將來時表示將來的愿望；人稱采用第一人稱；準備機器人報告的過程的描述很細致、條理。

3、高分亮點

短語：Looking back on；the most unforgettable；make an English presentation；In order to；

prepared for it；had a strong sense of satisfaction and achievement；Without doubt；

句型：Even though we had different jobs to do, we helped each other a lot by offering valuable information and possible methods.

In my opinion, friendship not only means to care or understand, but also to support and encourage each other.