Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)（15分）

假如你是Li Ming，本周末班里舉行英語(yǔ)角活動(dòng)，用英語(yǔ)討論游泳安全問題。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫一篇簡(jiǎn)單發(fā)言稿。要點(diǎn)如下：

1、游泳有益健康；但有些地方不太安全；

2、不要獨(dú)自到江河游泳；應(yīng)有家人或朋友陪伴；

3、游泳前做好準(zhǔn)備工作，不要倉(cāng)促下水；

4、游泳時(shí)相互關(guān)照；時(shí)間不要太長(zhǎng)。

5、寫1—2點(diǎn)個(gè)人建議。

要求：1、詞數(shù)60—80，發(fā)言稿的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

2、參考詞匯：keep fit 有益健康 look after關(guān)照 in a hurry倉(cāng)促

Fellow students,

_______________ ________

_______________ ________

_______________ ________

Thank s.

Answer 1

【答案】

Fellow students, I’m glad to tell you something about my study and everyday life.

Li Ming is good at his lessons and his favorite subject is English. He is friendly to others and willing to help others. He always has many things to do in the spare time. And he has his own hobbies. He likes to surf the internet to get what he wants. He likes music very much. I think we should learn from Li Ming. Students should study hard and also enjoy life out of class.

Thank s.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語(yǔ)，可見該生英語(yǔ)功底扎實(shí)。如He likes to surf the internet to get what he wants.等，I think等使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。