Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)

你即將進(jìn)入高中（the Senior High School）學(xué)習(xí)生活。開(kāi)學(xué)前，外籍老師在網(wǎng)上發(fā)了一張座位表，讓同學(xué)自主選擇座位。你的同學(xué)Mary、John已作出選擇。請(qǐng)仔細(xì)閱讀下列圖表，用英文完成一篇短文。

要求：

1.描述這兩位同學(xué)的座位位置和選擇原因，可進(jìn)行合理擴(kuò)展；

2.請(qǐng)選擇你的座位并予以描述，說(shuō)明有別于他人的理由二至三條；

3.文中不得出現(xiàn)與學(xué)校和個(gè)人相關(guān)的真實(shí)信息。

4.詞數(shù)：80個(gè)左右（文章開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）

the Teacher’s Desk

	Mary
				John

Names	Seat	Reasons
Mary	Number 5, Row 1	listen more carefully, see clearly
John	Number 3, Row 3	be tall, like to be with classmates around
You	…	…

參考詞匯：far from, next to, in front of, stay alone, be near-sighted

It’s so great to choose the seat myself in the Senior High School. My classmate Mary wants to sit ________________

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Answer 1

【答案】It’s so great to choose the seat myself in the Senior High School. My classmate Mary wants to sit near the teacher’s desk, so she chooses Number 5 in Row 1. She makes this choice because she wants to listen more carefully and see clearly during the class. John is another classmate of mine. Unlike Mary, he chooses Number 3 in Row 3, which is a little bit far from the teacher’s desk. This is because he is tall and likes to be with classmates around.

As for me, I would like to choose Number 4 in Row 1, in front of the teacher’s desk. On one hand, I am near-sighted. On the other hand, I want to stay alone during the class because this can let me pay attention to what the teacher says.

【解析】試題分析：本文是一篇材料作文。根據(jù)語(yǔ)境可知本文主要時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)�？忌�首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，把提示內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)清：1.描述這兩位同學(xué)的座位位置和選擇原因，可進(jìn)行合理擴(kuò)展（Mary Number 5, Row 1 listen more carefully, see clearly；John Number 3, Row 3 be tall, like to be with classmates around）；2.請(qǐng)選擇你的座位并予以描述，說(shuō)明有別于他人的理由二至三條；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)與學(xué)校和個(gè)人相關(guān)的真實(shí)信息。4.詞數(shù)：80個(gè)左右（文章開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，合理使用提示詞（far from, next to, in front of, stay alone, be near-sighted），文中內(nèi)容要連貫。本文只需根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，連詞成句，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象即可。首先我們應(yīng)運(yùn)用正確的熟悉的英語(yǔ)句子，要盡量使用一些好的句型和連詞，最好使用我們熟悉和背過(guò)的句型，盡量不要使用復(fù)雜的從句，減少語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，不要犯單詞拼寫(xiě)上的錯(cuò)誤。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的作文。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)完整、應(yīng)用詞匯靈活準(zhǔn)確，句子通順、表達(dá)清楚，上下文連貫。合理使用了提示詞，應(yīng)用了較豐富的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯（On the other hand, I want to stay alone during the class because this can let me pay attention to what the teacher says.），注意了連詞（so，because，Unlike Mary, As for me, On one hand, On the other hand,）和時(shí)態(tài)的使用，沒(méi)有語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，字?jǐn)?shù)符合要求。