Question

20．今年年初，你們學(xué)校組織同學(xué)們學(xué)習(xí)"八禮四儀"，并開展了一個(gè)"爭(zhēng)做文明市民"的活動(dòng)．同學(xué)們?cè)谌穗H交往、社會(huì)公德等方面都比以前有了很大的進(jìn)步．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表所提示的要點(diǎn)，以"To be a civilized citizen"為題，寫一篇英語短文，介紹同學(xué)們的表現(xiàn)，并談你對(duì)這個(gè)活動(dòng)的看法．

表現(xiàn)	人際交流	尊敬他人  誠(chéng)信友善 樂于助人  禮貌待人
	社會(huì)公德	遵守交規(guī)  愛護(hù)環(huán)境 熱心慈善  （自擬一點(diǎn)）
感受	你對(duì)這個(gè)活動(dòng)的看法（自擬，至少一點(diǎn)）

要求：
1 表達(dá)清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；
2 必須包括所有相關(guān)信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3 詞數(shù)：100詞左右（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；
4 不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等．
To be a civilized citizen
Our school organized an educational activity called"To be a civilized citizen"at the beginning of the year．All the students took part in this activity and they have improved a lot in many ways．
                                       

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
They know ①②it's important to respect the old and care for the young．他們知道尊老愛幼是重要的．
①know后是省略了that的賓語從句．
②it's+adj+to do sth 做某事是怎樣的，it是形式主語，動(dòng)詞不定式是真正主語．
【高分句型二】
They are always patient enough to listen to others about the joy and worries．他們總是有足夠的耐心去傾聽他人的快樂和擔(dān)憂．
adj+enough to do sth足夠怎樣去做某事．

解答 To be a civilized citizen
Our school organized an educational activity called"To be a civilized citizen"at the beginning of the year．All the students took part in this activity and they have improved a lot in many ways．
It's really nice to see the students being polite now．They know it's important to respect the old and care for the young．【高分句型一】They also realize they should have good manners and be honest．As a result，they are always friendly to others．Moreover，they are willing to help people any time．When they are on the bus，they always give their seats to people in need．They are always patient enough to listen to others about the joy and worries【高分句型二】．（尊敬他人  誠(chéng)信友善，樂于助人  禮貌待人）
Now the students don't just care about themselves．They tell others it's very necessary to follow the traffic rules．They also protect the environment．They spend their spare time on the charity activities．They often raise money to help the poor students in our school．（遵守交規(guī)  愛護(hù)環(huán)境，熱心慈善，幫助他人）
I'm glad to find the students have learnt a lot from this activity．I will learn from them and try to be a civilized citizen as well．（對(duì)這個(gè)活動(dòng)的看法）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇給材料作文．本文給出了一些要點(diǎn)，并給出了作文的開頭．我們要做的就是用正確的英語把要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象說出自己的觀點(diǎn)．動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來寫，要注意主謂一致等問題．