Question

8．假如你是李華．正值平谷舉辦"桃花音樂節(jié)"之際．邀請你在北京城里某中學就讀的好朋友-美國交換生Peter來平谷參觀．請以"My Beautiful Hometown，Pinggu"為話題．用英語寫一篇短文．
簡要介紹平谷，告訴他從北京如何來平谷，在平谷可以做的事，以及你的希望．
提示詞語：peaches，scenic spots，（Jinhai Lake，Jingdong Big Cave，Jingdong Big Valley，etc．）
concerts，food
提示問題：●What's Pinggu famous for？
●How can he come to Pinggu？What can he do here？
●What's your hope？

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇給材料作文，要求以"My Beautiful Hometown，Pinggu"為題寫一篇短文．寫作要點是簡要介紹平谷，告訴交換生Peter從北京如何來平谷，在平谷可以做的事，以及李華的希望．人稱主要為第二人稱，時態(tài)主要為用一般現(xiàn)在時．要注意人稱和動詞的運用．
高分句型：
①It takes you about an hour and a half to get here．到這里需要花費你一個半小時．
句子考查句型：It takes sb some time to do sth，表示花費某人多長時間做某事，后面跟to引導的不定式短語，
an hour and a half 一個半小時，還可以說one and a half hours．
②I think you're sure to like it．我想你一定會喜歡它的．
I think 后面跟的是一個that引導賓語從句，這里省略了that，be  sure to do sth一定要做某事，后面跟的是to引導的不定式形式．

解答 My Beautiful Hometown，Pinggu
  Pinggu is famous for its big peaches．There're many，many peach trees．In spring，you can see peach flowers everywhere．We call it"peach flower sea"．In Autumn，you can eat big and sweet peaches．（簡要介紹平谷）
  Pinggu is not far from your school．You can take No．852or918 bus from Dongzhimen．It takes you about an hour and a half to get here（高分句型）．（如何來平谷）
 There are many famous scenic spots，such as Jinhai Lake，Jingdong Big Valley，etc．You can visit some of them if you have time．A concert is held every year in spring and then many popular music stars come．I think you're sure to like it．（高分句型）There are also much delicious local food．If you like，you can have a try．（在平谷可以做的事）
I hope you'll come soon and have a good time in my hometown．（祝愿和希望）

點評 本文緊扣材料，要點完整，表達清晰流暢．文中用到了很多短語，如：be famous for，far from，be sure to do，have a good time等等．我們在平時的學習中應加強寫的訓練，寫作時要做到字跡工整，卷面整潔，語言流暢要把文中的要點寫全，做到語句通順，過渡自然連貫．