Question

A. A review of __________
B. As a student, I should _____________
要求：
請(qǐng)從所給的A，B 兩個(gè)題目中任選其一作答。請(qǐng)把題目補(bǔ)充完整再作答。
注意緊扣主題，意思連貫，語言通順，書寫規(guī)范。
不得使用真實(shí)姓名和校名。
詞數(shù)不少于60。

Answer 1

As a student, I Should Put My Time to Good Use
As a middle school student, there are so many things I have to do and I want to do. I need much time to study and I also want more time to do the things I like to do. So how to use time effectively is important to me. If I can’t arrange my time well I will face many problems. First, I should spend much time on my studying, because studying is the most important things to a student. And in my spare time, I need to exercise three or four times a week. It can help me become healthier. Besides, I can listen to music or do some reading after I finish my homework. In a word, as a student, I should spend most of my time studying and also develop my hobbies.

試題分析：這是一篇命題作文。在選擇一個(gè)標(biāo)題并補(bǔ)充完整后進(jìn)行寫作。標(biāo)題一定要清楚明確，這確定了這篇文章的主要內(nèi)容，作文內(nèi)容一定要緊扣主題。句子表達(dá)要完整準(zhǔn)確，句子之間邏輯要緊密，例如合理使用連詞。可適當(dāng)?shù)氖褂脤W(xué)過的復(fù)雜句型，如定語從句等。
【亮點(diǎn)分析】本文緊扣主題，表達(dá)清晰流暢，文中使用了一些很有用的表達(dá)方式和句型，例如：I need much time to study and I also want more time to do the things I like to do.我需要很多時(shí)間來學(xué)校，而且我也想要更多的時(shí)間來做我喜歡的事情。And連接兩個(gè)并列句，I like to do是省略了that定語從句，修飾things。First, I should spend much time on my studying, because studying is the most important things to a student.首先，我要花很多時(shí)間來學(xué)習(xí)，因?yàn)閷W(xué)習(xí)是一個(gè)學(xué)生最重要的事情。Spend time on sth./doing sth.花時(shí)間在某事上/做某事，because引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句。文中也用到了一些連詞如First, Besides, In a word使文章結(jié)構(gòu)更清晰。