Question

【題目】書面表達 (計25分)

假如你是第二中學的一名初三學生劉星，你要寫一封信給青少年專家Sigmund，告訴他你遇到的問題，并請求幫助。請根據(jù)下列表格中的信息完成這封信。

姓名	劉星
最喜歡的顏色	橙色，因為橙色代表著快樂。
個人特質(zhì)	善良、慷慨、自信，富有創(chuàng)造力
遇到的問題	1. 迷戀動漫真人秀(cosplay)，會花很多時間在這上面； 2. 父母對你不滿意，要求你放棄這個愛好； 3. …
目前需求	希望得到建議

注意:1. 短文須包括以上內(nèi)容要點，要求語句通順、意思連貫；

2. 不要標題；詞數(shù)100個左右。

Dear Sigmund，

My name is Liu Xing. I’m a Grade 9 student in No 2 Middle School.

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I hope to hear from you soon.

Best wishes!

Yours，

Liu Xing

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sigmund，

My name is Liu Xing. I’m a Grade 9 student in No 2 Middle School.My constellation is Gemin. My favorite color is orange ，because orange stands for happiness.I think I am kind-hearted. I often help the olds. I am also generous and confident.I am a creative boy.I often think of new jokes to make my friends laugh.

Though I am a good boy， I have some problems .I like cosplay very much .I often spend a lot of time on cosplay.But my parents are strict with me，they want me to give up this hobby，because they think it wastes my time.I have no time to study.I like chatting on line，my mother says that is a bad habit.And sometimes I come home too late，my parents are not happy.They ask me to get home on time.I don’t know how to slove these problems.Can you give me some advice?

I hope to hear from you soon.

Best wishes!

Yours，

Liu Xing

【解析】

試題分析：根據(jù)題目提示，我們應(yīng)該確定本文的時態(tài)應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱應(yīng)該用第一人稱；注意描述的順序；注意時態(tài)，人稱和固定詞組搭配，注意連詞的運用。注意句子的順暢，應(yīng)符合英語的表達習慣。這是一篇書信，注意格式及語氣。

寫作亮點：文中用了許多固定短語，如my favorite color，be strict with，have no time to do sth，chat on line；come home too late，hand in，on time，give up等，能夠很好的連接文章。根據(jù)表格，劉星有好的方面也有不好的方面，所以分開對比，效果更好。