Question

3．在我們的生活中，總會遇到許多困難或不如意的事情，如生活上的、學(xué)習(xí)上的、情感上的…但是，好的心情可以幫助我們樹立信心，直面問題，發(fā)現(xiàn)生活的美好．請你以"Better Mood，Better Life"為題寫一篇短文，讓我們分享你的經(jīng)歷、感受或想法．字數(shù)：80詞左右．
溫馨提示：1．短文中請勿使用真實姓名、地點或所在學(xué)校名稱．
2．這些單詞也許對你有幫助：difficulty，unhappy，deal with，relax，confident
Better Mood，Better Life                  ．

Answer 1

分析 本題主題為"Better Mood，Better Life"（好心態(tài)，好生活）．
寫作要點為：分享你的經(jīng)歷、感受或想法．

解答 范文一
　                         Better Mood，Better Life
Life is wonderful．While we're enjoying it，we have to meet some difficulties and problems．
Maybe your family is poor，your study gives you so much stress，you are not in good health…
Try to face the problems bravely and smile to life．Then you'll have a better spirit to deal with the difficulties．Relax yourself by listening to music，doing sports，writing diaries and so on．You'll keep happy all the time and have a happy life．After the storm，there must be a wonderful rainbow．
Better mood will give you better life，I am sure．
范文二   　                      
Better Mood，Better Life
Difficulties may come with the happiness in our life．I did well in my study except physics．I found so many problems on physics．I nearly wanted to give it up．
I talked about my problems to my teachers．He gave me some advice to improve my study．I also got some help from my classmates after class．I rebuilt my confidence by chatting with my parents，reading，enjoying the music and doing sports．I made great progress after that．
Nothing is difficult if I believe in myself．

點評 評分原則：
1．本題總分為15分，其中內(nèi)容和語言占13分，詞數(shù)占1分，書寫占1分．按五個檔次給分．
2．評分時，先根據(jù)短文的內(nèi)容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來衡量、確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分．不少于70個單詞，不多于90個單詞，加1分．書寫清晰、規(guī)范，加1分．
3．各檔次的給分范圍和要求：
第五檔：（14-15分）能扣緊主題，語言基本無誤；行文連貫；表達清楚．
第四檔：（11-13分）能扣緊主題，語言有少量錯誤；行文基本連貫；表達基本清楚．
第三檔：（8-10分） 語言有一些錯誤或較多錯誤；但仍能達意；行文不夠連貫．
第二檔：（4-7分）     離題，只寫出一、兩個句子；語言錯誤多或很多，影響意思表達或只有個別的句子可懂．
第一檔：（0-3分）     詞不達意，不能寫出一個完整的句子；或只能寫出與所要求內(nèi)容有關(guān)的一些單詞；
說明：若寫出自己和老師的真實姓名或?qū)W校的真實名稱酌情扣分．