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2．我們的家鄉(xiāng)正在發(fā)生著日新月異的變化，為配合我區(qū)舉辦的"禮儀門頭溝（Charm Mentougou）"活動(dòng)的開(kāi)展，請(qǐng)你以"How to behave well？"為主題，寫一篇不少于60詞的英語(yǔ)作文參賽．
內(nèi)容包括：1．守時(shí)，不說(shuō)臟話；2．禮貌待人，熱心助人；3．遵守交通規(guī)則，不亂扔垃圾；4…
注意：1．文中不能出現(xiàn)校名和自己的姓名；2．內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)擴(kuò)展．
How to behave well？
As a student in Mentougou，we should behave well．（開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題）
First，I think it's very important to do everything on time and keep promises．【高分句型一】Never lie to others or say dirty words．Next we should be polite to others and ready to help people in need．Then we'd better not talk loudly in public．Don't throw litter everywhere．And remember to obey traffic rules．Finally，learn to work withothers．We need good team work in our life．（提出建議）
If we do like this，ourhometown will become more and more beautiful．【高分句型二】（總結(jié)全文）．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
First，I think it's very important to do everything on time and keep promises．
句中"it's very important to do everything on time and keep promises"為賓語(yǔ)從句，使用句式為：it is+形容詞+to do sth．這句話意為：首先，我認(rèn)為做事情守時(shí)并遵守諾言很重要．
高分句型二：
If we do like this，our hometown will become more and more beautiful．
句中"If we do like this"為條件狀語(yǔ)從句，句中短語(yǔ)有"比較級(jí)+and+比較級(jí) 越來(lái)越…"．這句話意為：如果我們這樣做，我們的家鄉(xiāng)會(huì)變得越來(lái)越漂亮．

解答 How to behave well？
As a student in Mentougou，we should behave well．（開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題）
First，I think it's very important to do everything on time and keep promises．【高分句型一】Never lie to others or say dirty words．Next we should be polite to others and ready to help people in need．Then we'd better not talk loudly in public．Don't throw litter everywhere．And remember to obey traffic rules．Finally，learn to work withothers．We need good team work in our life．（提出建議）
If we do like this，our hometown will become more and more beautiful．【高分句型二】（總結(jié)全文）

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