Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

根據(jù)下列提示寫一篇題為“Saving tigers” 的英語短文，詞數(shù)80-100詞。

1. 老虎是最受人們歡迎的動(dòng)物之一。

2. 現(xiàn)在世界上僅存老虎約3200只，并且數(shù)目日益減少。

3. 老虎處境危險(xiǎn)的原因。(沒有足夠的水，食物和居住地；人類的捕獵等)

4. 保護(hù)老虎的建議。

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Answer 1

【答案】

Saving Tigers

Have you visited zoos? Have you seen tigers in the zoos? I think a tiger is one of the most favorite

animals in the zoo. But now there are about 3200 tigers in the world, and the amount of them is reducing.

What caused them to reduce? Because many forests are cut down and they have no place to live in. In order

to protect them we must build many natural reserves. And we must stop people from hunting.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。在寫作前首先要仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點(diǎn)。其次要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫。

再次根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)；語言表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：該文語句流暢，準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)了題目中的每個(gè)要點(diǎn)。還多次使用了連接詞如and、but、because等，都為文章增色不少。