Question

健康的生活習慣對于成長中的我們是非常重要的。你認為健康的生活習慣應當是怎樣的.
請根據下面的信息提示,寫一篇短文,首句已給出。
信息提示：健康飲食; 早睡早起,不熬夜; 參加運動,強身健體。
要求:根據信息提示,把握要點,適當發(fā)揮,不逐字翻譯。字數在80詞左右。至少寫出5個意思連貫，結構完整，語法正確的句子。
I think healthy habits are very important for us.

Answer 1

I think healthy habits are very important for us.But how do you keep healthy ? Here some suggestions for you.I think firstly we should eat a lalanced diet and not eat too much meat or sugar .We also should form a good living habit .Getting up and going to bed early is good for our health,but staying up dose harm to our health.It is important for us to do some exercises to keep fit,because life lies in movement. Let us form healthy habits to enjoy our lives.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內容表達出來。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并適當發(fā)揮。根據材料內容可知本文主要是一般現在時態(tài)，主語是第一人稱，注意時態(tài)語時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯系緊密，符合邏輯關系。
【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少.如: healthy habits 健康的習慣；eat a lalanced diet 均衡飲食；is good for 對……有好處；but staying up dose harm to our health.但是熬夜對我們的健康有害等,學習中注意總結,牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理.