Question

【題目】假定你是張偉,你的英國筆友David來信問及你的寒假生活，請給他回一封電子郵件。80詞左右

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear David,

Thank you for your e-mail. You asked me my winter holiday. Let me tell you something about it.

I really had a busy and happy winter holiday. I did my homework and helped my parents with the housework every day. I like drawing so much that I spent lots of time drawing pictures and read books about drawing every day. I sometimes went to the library to read books and surfed the internet.During the Spring Festival, i visited my grandparents, friends and relatives. We really had a great time together. I prepared for the new lessons and read English,too. I really enjoyed my winter holiday.

Yours,

Zhang Wei

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇書信，要注意格式。本文時(shí)態(tài)是一般過去時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱。寫作過程中注意人稱和時(shí)態(tài)保持一致。注意運(yùn)用連詞使語意連貫，具有邏輯性。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本篇文章采用了大量的短語和句式，為文章增色不少。比如: I like drawing so much that I spent lots of time drawing pictures and read books about drawing every day. 我喜歡畫畫，所以我每天花大量的時(shí)間畫畫和閱讀有關(guān)畫畫的書籍。在學(xué)習(xí)中要注意總結(jié)，將所學(xué)句型和短語運(yùn)用到寫作當(dāng)中去。