Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)。

假如你和王翔是同班同學(xué)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表所提供的信息，以My Good Friend為題寫一篇60個(gè)詞左右的短文，向你的朋友介紹一下王翔。所提供的信息盡量用上。

Name	Wang Xiang (a student)
From	Guangdong, China
Age	14
Look	tall, round face, big eyes
Family	father (an office worker), mother (a nurse)
Favorite food	chicken
dinner	rice, fish and vegetables

Answer 1

【答案】

My Good Friend

I have a good friend. His name is Wang Xiang. Wang Xiang is a student and he comes from Guangdong, China. He is 14 years old. He looks (very) tall; he has a round face and big eyes. His father is an office worker and his mother is a nurse. His favorite food is chicken. He often has rice, fish and vegetables for dinner.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我的好朋友。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為第三人稱單數(shù)，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：He is …， His father is ...及He usually has 等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡(jiǎn)練。開頭介紹了我的朋友的名字，接下來介紹他的家人，最后介紹他喜歡的食物。此處用了 with a round face， favorite food，has rice 等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章內(nèi)容更加豐富。