Question

【題目】書面表達

以“My good friend-Amy”為題，寫一篇60詞左右的短文。

要點提示:1. Amy 12歲，留著又長又黑的頭發(fā)，來自北京，現(xiàn)在和父母一起住在宜興;

2. Amy又高又苗條，看上去討人喜歡，不戴眼鏡;

3. Amy擅長畫畫，喜愛舞蹈;

4. Amy喜歡所有功課;

5. Amy在學校有許多好朋友，他們都對她很好。

My good friend-Amy

Answer 1

【答案】My good friend-Amy

Amy is 12 years old. She has long and black hair. She is/comes from Beijing. She lives in Yixing with her parents. Amy is tall and slim. She looks lovely and doesn't wear glasses.

Amy is good at drawing, and she likes dancing. She is good at all the subjects. She has many good friends at school. They are all nice to her.

【解析】

寫作思路：本文是一篇介紹朋友的文章。首先要開篇點題，指出誰是我最好的朋友，然后根據(jù)寫作內(nèi)容提示，對我的好朋友進行描述，最后對文章進行總結(jié)，做到收尾呼應(yīng)。本篇作文分別介紹了Amy的年齡，長相，愛好，擅長的科目等，條理清晰，內(nèi)容全面，符合題目要求。整篇文章使用一般現(xiàn)在時，時態(tài)運用正確。并且be good at, come from, be nice to sb，like doing sth等短語的使用恰到好處，是一篇不錯的文章。