Question

【題目】書面表達

根據(jù)下面表格所提供的信息，寫一封信，向你的筆友李平介紹你的家人和他們所喜歡的東西。要求詞數(shù)60左右。開頭已給出。

Family member	Job	Work place	Food	Drink
Father	doctor	hospital	rice, chicken	tea
Mother	teacher	school	vegetables, fish	orange juice
Tom	student	school	meat, hamburgers	milk, apple juice

Dear Li Ping,

Hi, I’m Tom. I’m a student. ______________________________________________

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Yours,

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Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Li Ping,

Hi, I’m Tom. I’m a student. There are there people in my family. They are my father, my mother and I. My father is a doctor. He works in a hospital. He likes rice and chicken. And his favorite drink is tea. My mother is a teacher. She teaches in a school. Her favorite food is vegetables and fish. She thinks they’re healthy. She likes orange juice very much. I am a student and I study in a school. I like meat and hamburgers. I also like milk and apple juice. This is my family.

Yours,

Tom

【解析】

試題解析：這篇短文要求我們用英文描述Tom及其家人。本題給出的材料較為詳細，動筆前要先認真閱讀要點，然后圍繞要點展開寫作。根據(jù)所給材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要用第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)進行敘述。

寫作亮點：這篇短文使用的句式短語較為簡單. 主要是主謂結(jié)構(gòu)。但是通過一些這些簡單句式的靈活搭配，使得文章避免單純的重復(fù)，使得短文既通俗易懂又邏輯清楚。