Question

【題目】 在“八禮四儀”教育活動中，同學(xué)們收獲很大，尤其是李偉同學(xué)。請你根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容寫一篇英語短文，敘述李偉在活動前后的表現(xiàn)。詞數(shù)在100詞左右。文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

	In the past	At the moment
Li Wei	come to school late quarrel with others make noise in class throw rubbish everywhere	come to school early be friendly to others listen to the teachers carefully help collect rubbish
Your advice

I am glad that Li Wei has made great progress. ______________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

I am glad that Li Wei has made great progress. In the past, he often came to school late. He used to quarrel with his classmates. He made a lot of noise in class. Sometimes he played computer games too much. His parents and teachers all worried about him. They talked with him patiently.

Now, he has changed a lot. He comes to school on time. He is friendly to his classmates. He listens to the teachers carefully in class. He often helps collect the rubbish with other students. He can finish his homework on time. All the teachers and classmates like him very much.

I hope our class will organize more activities. Our classmates will take part in them actively. We will certainly be more helpful, more friendly and more skillful.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。要求介紹。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實(shí)。如He often helps collect the rubbish with other students. We will certainly be more helpful, more friendly and more skillful.等，I hope等使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。