Question

【題目】善待他人是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開(kāi)展以“團(tuán)結(jié)友善”為

主題的征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你用英文寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿，說(shuō)說(shuō)你對(duì)善待

他人的看法，你曾經(jīng)友善待人的經(jīng)歷，以及你的感受。

提示詞語(yǔ)： important, help, happy

提示問(wèn)題： ● What do you think of being kind to others?

● What did you do?

● How do you feel?

Being kind to others is a traditional virtue (美德) of Chinese people. ______

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Answer 1

【答案】Being kind to others is a traditional virtue of Chinese people. I think it’s very

important for everyone. When I started middle school, my friend Peter failed in the

English exam last year. He was so sad that he wanted to give up. When I knew this, I

encouraged him and gave him some advice. Every day we did homework together,

when he met some difficult English problems, I would help him to work them out.

Little by little, with my help, he improved his English skills. At the end of this term,

he made a great progress. He was very happy, I was also proud.

【解析】

試題

本題要求談?wù)剬?duì)善待他人的看法，曾經(jīng)友善待人的經(jīng)歷，以及你的感受。短文要覆蓋提示的所有要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。文中正確使用時(shí)態(tài)（過(guò)去時(shí)）來(lái)描述過(guò)去的經(jīng)歷以進(jìn)行表達(dá)，使用第一人稱形式進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作。但也要注意在總結(jié)自己的感受，談?wù)撚^點(diǎn)的時(shí)候要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)表明看法。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：

短文開(kāi)始就引入話題；提出了善待別人是傳統(tǒng)美德，借助動(dòng)名詞做主語(yǔ)（Being kind to others is…），之后介紹了一段自己的經(jīng)歷，表意清晰，中心明確，動(dòng)詞過(guò)去時(shí)使用正確。有幾個(gè)短語(yǔ)和結(jié)構(gòu)的使用堪稱亮點(diǎn)，如：so…that…; give up, give sb some advice, work out, little by little, with my help，豐富的短語(yǔ)交錯(cuò)使用，使得故事表達(dá)清晰具體，切合主題，主旨鮮明突出。