【題目】寫作

今年國慶節(jié)，我和家人一起去鳳凰島濕地公園游玩，在那兒玩得很開心�；貋砗髮懥艘黄P(guān)于鳳凰島濕地公園的作文。要點如下：

1. 鳳凰島濕地公園地處揚州市東部，是我國重要的濕地公園之一，是各種鳥類的理想的棲息地。

2. 人們最喜歡春天去那兒……

3. 他們喜歡在那里拍照、野餐......

4. 我們可以研究那兒的動物、植物。希望人們明白保護(hù)濕地的重要性。

具體要求：

1. 語句通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，字跡工整；

2. 必須包含所有相關(guān)信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

3. 開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù), 100詞左右。

Fenghuang Wetland Park

My family and I visited Fenghuang Wetland Park this National Day. We enjoyed ourselves there.

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【答案】

Fenghuang Wetland Park

My family and I visited Fenghuang Wetland Park this National Day. We enjoyed ourselves there.

The Phoenix Island Wetland Park is located in the east of Yangzhou city. It is one of the most important wetland parks in China. It is an ideal habitat for all kinds of birds.

Lots of people like to travel there in spring. They have a great time taking pictures and having a picnic there. What’s more, we can study the animals and plants there. I hope that people can understand the importance of the protection of wetlands.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文要求我們根據(jù)所給信息，來介紹一下自己國慶節(jié)的旅行。題目中有關(guān)于旅游的具體信息，我們應(yīng)用正確的英語將這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。這些信息包括了鳳凰島濕地公園的地理位置、游客等，寫作時，我們可以根據(jù)需要將這些信息進(jìn)行重新整理和安排，使文章的意思銜接更自然。而且這些關(guān)于介紹人物時所使用的詞匯和句型，是學(xué)生們比較熟悉的，所以將平時的積累發(fā)揮出來就可以。當(dāng)然我們要盡量使用一些好的句型和連詞，使文章上下文意思連貫，更出彩。

寫作亮點：這是一篇非常優(yōu)秀的作文，短文中作者按照題目的要求，給我們介紹了自己旅行，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，要點全面。而且作者在寫作時，并不是完全按照題目中給出的順序，逐句翻譯的，而是將這些信息進(jìn)行了整合，讓意思關(guān)聯(lián)緊密的放在一起表達(dá)，這一點很好。短文中的語言合乎英語的表達(dá)規(guī)范，而且作者還使用了一些較好的句式，增強了文章的連貫性。如動詞不定式Lots of people like to travel there in spring.、介詞短語The Phoenix Island Wetland Park is located in the east of Yangzhou city.、連詞What’s more, we can study the animals and plants there.、賓語從句I hope that people can understand the importance of the protection of wetlands.等。

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