Question

【題目】一首《時(shí)間都去哪兒了》的歌曲曾經(jīng)引發(fā)很多人的思考和熱議。某英文網(wǎng)站也對此問題在初三學(xué)生中做了調(diào)查，請根據(jù)調(diào)查結(jié)果，以“Our Spare Time”為題寫一篇英文報(bào)道向該網(wǎng)站投稿，并談?wù)勛约旱目捶ê徒ㄗh，可根據(jù)表內(nèi)信息進(jìn)行適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。80詞左右.

	Free time activities	Why?
most students	do homework； take after-school classes	top students enter a good senior high school
a few students say	play online games play on QQ.	not interested in any subjects
in my spare time and my advice	…	…

要求：1）文章須包含所給要點(diǎn)，并闡述自己的看法；
2）文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名、班級和人名；
Our Spare Time
Recently, the website has made a surveyabout “Where has your spare time gone?”. Here is the result.

Answer 1

【答案】Our Spare Time
Recently, the website has made a survey about “Where has your spare time gone?”. Here is the result. Most students think they spend almost all the time doing their homework and taking after-school classes. That's because their parents want them to be top students, and they themselves also want to enter a good senior high school next year. Few students say they usually play online games and chat with friends on QQ. They are not interested in any subjects, and they don't want to do homework. As for me, I help my parents with some housework after finishing my school work every day. I think it is also a good idea to spend some time doing sports.
【解析】這是一篇給材料作文。本文給出了一些要點(diǎn)，并給出了作文的開頭。我們要做的就是用正確的英語把要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象說出自己的觀點(diǎn)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來寫，要注意主謂一致等問題。寫作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。這篇短文多次使用連接詞and，還使用了一些主從復(fù)合句如That's because their parents want them to be top students，I think it is also a good idea to spend some time doing sports等等為文章增色不少。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。