Question

5．規(guī)劃人生，成就未來(lái)．請(qǐng)寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文，描述你夢(mèng)想的工作．
提示：1．我外向，常常講故事逗同學(xué)笑．
2．想成為一名演員，因?yàn)橄矚g看各種電影．
3．打算學(xué)唱歌、跳舞，努力學(xué)英語(yǔ)．
4、高中畢業(yè)后想去上大學(xué)，學(xué)表演課．
5、找一份理想的工作并環(huán)游世界．
要求：1、包含提示內(nèi)容，語(yǔ)句通順，語(yǔ)法正確，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2、不少于60詞，文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名等相關(guān)信息．
My dream job
I am an outgoing boy，I often tell jokes to make students laugh，I want to be an actor because I like seeing all kind s of movies．I'm going to learn to sing，dance and work hard at English．I want to go to college after graduating from high school，Iwill have acting classes，too．I think I can find an ideal job and travel around the world．I hope my dream will come true one day．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一  
I want to be an actor  because I like seeing all kind s of movies．我想成為一名演員，因?yàn)槲蚁矚g看各種各樣的電影．這是 because 引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句，因?yàn)椤��?br />高分句型二
I hope my dream will come true one day．我希望有一天我的夢(mèng)想會(huì)實(shí)現(xiàn)．這是一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句，I hope是主句，后面的是賓語(yǔ)從句．

解答 My dream job
I am an outgoing boy，I often tell jokes to make students laugh【要點(diǎn)一，我外向，常常講故事逗同學(xué)笑．】，I want to be an actor  because I like seeing all kind s of movies【高分句型一，注意狀語(yǔ)從句的使用】．【要點(diǎn)二，想成為一名演員，因?yàn)橄矚g看各種電影】I'm going to learn to sing，dance and work hard at English【要點(diǎn)三，打算學(xué)唱歌、跳舞，努力學(xué)英語(yǔ)】．I want to go to college after graduating from high school，I will have  acting classes，too．【要點(diǎn)四，高中畢業(yè)后想去上大學(xué)，學(xué)表演課．】I think I can find an ideal job and travel around the world．I hope my dream will come true one day【高分句型二，注意賓語(yǔ)從句的使用】．【要點(diǎn)五，找一份理想的工作并環(huán)游世界．】

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