Question

【題目】書面表達

假定你是李華，你的英國筆友正在寫一篇關(guān)于各國中學生課外閱讀(extra-curricular reading)情況的調(diào)查報告，他給你發(fā)了一封電子郵件，想了解相關(guān)情況。請你根據(jù)以下提示，給他回一封電子郵件。

注意：1.根據(jù)所給提示，適當發(fā)揮，你的思考至少要有兩點。

2.字數(shù)不少于100。開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

3.郵件中不得提及所在學校及本人姓名。

Dear Helen,

Thank you for your email. Now I would like to tell you something about

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Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Helen,

Thank you for your email. Now I would like to tell you something about the extra-curricular reading in our school. In fact, most of the students in our school haven't realized the importance of reading, especially extra-curricular reading. Therefore, the time and energy devoted to reading are very little. Besides, some students prefer to read comic books, magazines and newspapers rather than classic reading materials.

I think there are some reasons for this. First of all, quite a lot of students are busy with too much homework. Still others haven’t formed a good habit of reading. They would rather spend time on TVs or computer games instead.

However, reading is obviously helpful to both our life and study, which can not only improve our knowledge but enrich our life as well. So it is quite necessary for us students to take up reading and for teachers to reduce homework so that we can have more time to read.

Best Wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本文要求寫一篇關(guān)于中學生課外閱讀情況的調(diào)查報告�？梢詮谋拘�學生的閱讀情況入手，介紹每天閱讀時間，一個月的閱讀量等等。分析造成這種現(xiàn)關(guān)的原因：學習的時間太長，留給閱讀的時間不夠。在保證內(nèi)容要點全部概括的基礎(chǔ)上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進而用自己的語言來表達某種觀點或看法，寫作較為靈活，能較好地發(fā)揮想象能力和英語語言表達能力。首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在選擇句式時要賦予變化。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個人觀點的時候，可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采。短文用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，主要用第一人稱進行表達。

寫作亮點：本范文語言簡潔，應(yīng)用了一些較好的詞組和句子： as a result因此, prefer to do… rather than do…寧愿做……而不愿……，be burdened with負擔， form a habit of 形成……，the time and energy students devoted to reading are very limited.這句話用了定語從句， So it is quite necessary for the students to take up reading and for the teachers to limit the amount of our homework so that we can have more time to read. 這句話用了it做形式主語和so that句型還有范文使用了Besides, First of all, However,這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞使文章更加連貫。