Question

11．要求：1．書寫工整，美觀 2．包含所有要點(diǎn)上的內(nèi)容，可以根據(jù)需要適當(dāng)?shù)匕l(fā)揮
以Tree Planting Day 為題寫一篇80詞左右的短文．
要點(diǎn)如下：1．樹木的重要性（凈化空氣，給我們提供…，可以做家具，使生活方便，美化城市）
  2．今年的3月12日，我們班去種樹的情況匯報(bào)
  3．面對(duì)樹木的現(xiàn)狀（大量的砍伐），我們?cè)撛趺醋觯?

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
We can not only use it to build houses and make paper，but also use it to make many other things我們不僅僅能用樹木建造房子造紙，也可以制作其他的東西．
not only…but also…不僅…而且…
【高分句型二】
As soon as we arrived，we began to work我們一到就開始工作．
as soon as 一…就．

解答 Tree Planting Day
These years there is more and more pollution around us．So it is important to plant trees．Trees can make the environment beautiful and help to clean the air．It is also good for our health．  People use wood in many ways．We can not only use it to build houses and make paper，but also use it to make many other things．【高分句型一】For example，a lot of things in our houses are made of wood．（樹木的重要性）
We went to plant trees on Mar 12th． As soon as we arrived，we began to work．【高分句型二】Some were digging holes，some were planting and others were watering．We all know trees are very useful to man．Growing trees means saving man himself．We all worked very hard．When the sun went down，we came back home．Although we were very tired，we felt very happy．（今年的3月12日，我們班去種樹的情況匯報(bào)）
Unfortunately，nowadays in many parts of the world lots of people fail to realize the importance of trees．They have cut trees down in large numbers without a plan，which makes the soil washed away．So let's plant more trees and stop people from cutting them down．Everyone should try his best to keep the balance of nature．（面對(duì)樹木的現(xiàn)狀-大量的砍伐，我們?cè)撛趺醋觯?/p>

點(diǎn)評(píng) 寫作時(shí)要注意一些幾點(diǎn)：
（1）應(yīng)抓住文章中心，圍繞主題，根據(jù)提示列出要寫的信息要點(diǎn)．
（2）注意內(nèi)容是否充實(shí)、積極和健康．
（3）注意文章的結(jié)構(gòu)層次，要凸顯文章的主題．
（4）要注意語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，選材造句都盡量使用學(xué)過、見過的語(yǔ)言材料．