Question

【題目】文段表達(dá)

根據(jù)中文大意和英文提示詞語(yǔ)，寫一篇意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于50詞的短文。所給英文提示詞語(yǔ)供選用。請(qǐng)不要寫出你的真實(shí)校名和姓名。

紙質(zhì)書與電子書各有各自的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)常識(shí)和提示詞，談一談自己的看法。（50詞左右）

提示詞：prefer, comfortable, make notes , heavy, compared with, add extra cost, get tired

Answer 1

【答案】

As we all know,with the development of science and technology,electronic books are becoming more and more popular.They have some advantages.They are rich in contents with beautiful colours and interesting sounds.But they also have some disadvantages.They need electricity.They can do harm to our eyes if we keep reading them for a long time,and they are more expensive. In my opinion,electronic can't replace the traditional books.The reasons are as follows.First,a traditional book can be read everywhere,it does need electricity.Second,it is cheaper and is good to our eyes.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容為：內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、應(yīng)用詞匯和語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量和準(zhǔn)確性及上下文的連貫性。同時(shí)針對(duì)個(gè)人的真實(shí)情況與短文的要求進(jìn)行恰當(dāng)?shù)氖潞�，更能加�?qiáng)作品的可讀性。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)；應(yīng)用了較豐富的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯；用詞準(zhǔn)確、句子通順、行文連貫、表達(dá)清楚，沒(méi)有或基本沒(méi)有語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤；書寫工整；字?jǐn)?shù)符合要求。完全達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。