Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

人人都有自己最喜愛(ài)的食物，請(qǐng)以”My Favorite Food” 為題寫一篇80個(gè)單詞左右的作文，談?wù)勀阕钕矏?ài)的食物及其制作過(guò)程。

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Answer 1

【答案】

My Favorite Food

I like different kinds of food. But my favorite food is mooncakes. I like them very much. They are very delicious and popular.

Mooncakes are delicious round cakes. Some have eggs or nuts in them ,and some have meat. People usually buy them in a food shop. They look like the moon, so we call them mooncakes. Mooncakes are round and it means family members’ getting together. Mooncakes have many delicious materials. It means harvest. On the Mid-autumn Day Chinese people like having mooncakes. At night, we often stay in the open air. We look at the moon, eat mooncakes and talk about happy things. We always have a good time.

I like mooncakes best. Do you like mooncakes, too?

【解析】

試題分析：本題要求以“My Favorite Food”為題作文，寫出最喜歡的食物及其制作過(guò)程。短文從兩個(gè)方面進(jìn)行寫作，一是介紹自己最喜歡的食物；二是介紹這種食物的制作過(guò)程。短文用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行表達(dá)。要注意句型的選擇及應(yīng)用。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本范文第一段開(kāi)門見(jiàn)山：我最喜歡的食物是月餅。第二段先對(duì)月餅作了一些基本的介紹；然后說(shuō)出了月餅在中國(guó)文化中的含義：豐收、團(tuán)圓；最后講述月餅與中秋，進(jìn)一步升華了月餅的含義及我喜歡月餅的理由。短文最后簡(jiǎn)短結(jié)尾，首尾呼應(yīng)，主題突出。