Question

11．假如你叫金莉莉，你上周和你的同學(xué)及英語老師一起去野餐．請根據(jù)下表所提供的信息，寫一篇短文來介紹一下這次野餐的情況．

A  picnic（野餐）
Time	Last Sunday
Place	Fragrant Hill （ 香山）
Food and drinks	Sandwiches，vegetables，fruit，some juice
Activities	Take photos，fly kites，tell jokes …

要求：
1．語句通順，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2.70詞左右；開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
My name is Jin Lili．                                                     

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
After we arrived there，we took photos，flew kites and told jokes我們到達(dá)那里之后，我們照相，放風(fēng)箏和講笑話．
after引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句．
【高分句型二】
And we are all looking forward to our next picnic我們都期待下一次的旅行．
look forward to sth期待某事．

解答 My name is Jin Lili．I went to Fragrant Hill for a picnic with my classmates and our English teacher last Sunday（時間地點(diǎn)）．We took lots of food and drinks with us，such as sandwiches，vegetables，fruit and some juice．（食物飲料）After we arrived there，we took photos，flew kites and told jokes【高分句型一】．We also had a happy meal while enjoying the beautiful views of Fragrant Hill．（活動）It was really a great experience．We all had a good time that day．And we are all looking forward to our next picnic【高分句型二】．（感受）

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