Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)

假定你是李華，正在參加英語(yǔ)夏令營(yíng)。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿，談?wù)勀阍谙牧顮I(yíng)的活動(dòng)及收獲。

寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：

1.擅長(zhǎng)運(yùn)動(dòng)，參加籃球隊(duì)及比賽，學(xué)會(huì)與隊(duì)友合作……

2.喜愛(ài)英語(yǔ)，參加“英語(yǔ)角”，結(jié)交新朋友；用英語(yǔ)交流，提高英語(yǔ)水平。

參考詞匯：與隊(duì)友合作work with the teammates;英語(yǔ)角the English corner

寫(xiě)作要求：

1.詞數(shù)60-80；（開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）

2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名，否則不得分；

3.所給的要點(diǎn)必須都用上；緊扣主題，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

Hello, everyone!

I am Li Hua. I have learnt a lot on the English Summer Camp.

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I think I have done a good job. Thank you.

Answer 1

【答案】

Hello, everyone!

I am Li Hua. I have learnt a lot on the English Summer Camp.

I am good at sports, so I joined the basketball team. We had a basketball match with another team. At last our team won the match. Through the match I learned worked with the teammates. I was very happy.

I love English, I joined the English Corner. I made some new friends. We got on well with each other. We talked with each other in English, it improved my English.

I think I have done a good job. Thank you.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇作文叫小作者用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿，小作者首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。小作者還必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文不僅使用了大量的的短語(yǔ)，可見(jiàn)該生英語(yǔ)功底扎實(shí)。如Through the match I learned worked with the teammates. I was very happy. We got on well with each other. We talked with each other in English, it improved my English. 等使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。