Question

【題目】

現(xiàn)在中學(xué)生普遍覺得壓力很大，有人害怕考試，有人不能很好地處理人際關(guān)系，還有的覺得父母的期望值過高也對(duì)他們?cè)斐蓧毫�。你�?duì)此怎么看？請(qǐng)就此問題寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文，談?wù)勀愕淖龇�，與同學(xué)們分享經(jīng)驗(yàn)。

總詞數(shù)：80左右，短文的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Most students in our class are under too much pressure. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

In a world, less pressure makes for a better life.

Answer 1

【答案】Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Most students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students can’t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams.

I used to be under heavy pressure, too. My parents wanted me to be the top student in class. They made me study all day, and even sent me to all kinds of after-school classes on weekends.

I had a long talk with my parents. I told them that I tried my best and I didn’t feel well. Finally, they understood me. As a result, I was free from the heavy pressure.

In a world, less pressure makes for a better life.

【解析】這篇作文要求我們就中學(xué)生現(xiàn)在普遍壓力大這一現(xiàn)象，發(fā)表自己的看法，是一篇話題作文，題目中給出了寫作的話題，但是具體的寫作內(nèi)容需要學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮想象力來(lái)完成，這也是這篇作文難度最大的地方。首先應(yīng)先把中學(xué)生普遍壓力大這一現(xiàn)象表述清楚；下面是確定自己的寫作內(nèi)容，對(duì)于壓力自己的看法，也可以從自己的親身經(jīng)歷或者親身體會(huì)中來(lái)講述。最后做一個(gè)總結(jié)。這篇短文應(yīng)使用第一人稱，根據(jù)表達(dá)需要使用正確的時(shí)態(tài)。寫作時(shí)，應(yīng)注意上下文的連貫，表達(dá)的流暢。要使用正確的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和句型，不要寫漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)，要符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)規(guī)范。